Doctor Science ([info]mecurtin) wrote in [info]amific,
Nits for you!:

Rodney is partaking
was partaking

Rodney muttered and the turned to Ronon
and then turned

Rodney wanted to hug him he was so happy to see him.
Rodney wanted to hug him, he was so happy to see him (now with a comma!)

"Rodney, this is Sheppard, do you read?"
Wouldn't he call him "McKay" under these "now let's be professional and NOT PANIC" conditions, and on the radio?

realized his ribs ached a little to.
a little, too.

Sheppard leaned against his own wall and popped two pills under his mask, carefully not touching them with his gloved hands.
I still can't visualize how he does this. How is John popping pills under his mask without touching them (the pills, I assume) with his hands?

Whoops, I have to go to sleep. I shall send you more nits o love tomorrow.


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