Doctor Science ([info]mecurtin) wrote in [info]amific,
Nits are love:

He tipped his kind over gently
tipped his king

"Are bleeding internally?" He asked instead.
"Are you bleeding internally?" he asked instead.

He wasn't wearing gloves. Shoving them as far into his pockets
. . .gloves. Shoving his hands as far . . .

*I'm just amused that the person who doesn't do the pocket thing, is now doing it constantly. At least he's not breaking regs.</font>
You got your tags messed up.

four layers of covering,
?? I only count two -- my latex, your latex.

Okay just so we're clear
Okay, just so we're clear

slowly moving across his back, Rodney's fingers dug between John's lacing them together
slowly moving across his back. Rodney's fingers dug between John's, lacing them together


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